Waiting Poem by Jesus Diaz Llorico

Waiting



'Counting the earthly hours
of my temporary life
tired of wishing and waiting
staring at the empty streets
beside the window in my seat
a restlessness inside me
and pain so hard to hide
with patience going down
I'm going back to my rhymes.'

Tuesday, October 11, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: lifestyle
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jesus Diaz Llorico 14 October 2016

Thank you for a very fine comment Mr. S Zaynub Kamoonpuri

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 14 October 2016

Soulful and morose but that's what makes it so poetic as it is like a lyric in brevity. Yeah it's perfect to visit poetry world when bored or sad so as to spill ink such fine muse that many can relate to. Pls do comment my latest poem too called POETRY COMMENTARY EXPOSURE.....

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