Waiting By The Window Poem by David Wood

Waiting By The Window

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I waited by the window
My breath making a smoky haze
A pensive gaze the gate was open
I am but a caged bird waiting
The crooked path empty alone
Waiting for somebody to come
It leaves a sinister space
Leaves forming a golden carpet
Rustle

I waited by the window
Staring, looking over and over
But everything is still, quiet
I am waiting for her kiss
I am waiting for her footsteps
But all I have are my dreams

Thursday, September 17, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: love,love and loss,love and pain
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
For many the difficulty in losing somebody can be seen as they wait by their window looking for their loved one to walk back down the path to their door, I know the feeling well.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Anjandev Roy 25 February 2022

Magnificent write......thank u, dear friend..

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 23 September 2015

Your feeling is deeply embedded in your heart. The expectation as you wait by the window is a fulfilling thought to drown the empty feeling.

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