Waiting For A Train Poem by Seán O Muiríosa

Waiting For A Train



Straight lines,
Parallel tracks
Before me
East and West
In two minds
Metal screams
A deep echo.
To jump.
To even
Contemplate.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Goldy Locks 15 July 2006

yeah! your diverse experimentations in poetry are dignifiedly undeniable, Seán, keep it up.

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Patricia Gale 12 July 2006

The feeling you have captured well, imagery grand, strange thoughts that run through our mind as we wait.

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Brian Dorn 06 July 2006

Sean, interesting how those thoughts run through our heads... I think you've captured the feeling quite well. Good stuff. Brian

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