Waiting For You Poem by dillon Lowery

Waiting For You

Rating: 4.5


I sat here waiting for you
The clock just ticked
Second by second
Minute by minute
My heart started to fade

I waited no longer
so when i got home
I walked to the kitchen
tried you on you're phone
no one answered so I hung it up

I opened the knife cabniet
and pulled out a knife
i cut my arm
Once then twice
you broke my heart

so i cut my skin
now i never want to see
You again

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Man On Fire 30 December 2008

well penned I'll agree with the previous comment very good imagery and the whole thing flows very well a nice piece of work keep up the good work

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Sonny Rainshine 29 December 2008

Vivid imagery and a lot of passion. I hope, though, it's just a poem and that the act of cutting is just symbolic. Good to feel the pain thoroughly and honestly and then forget about it.

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