(April 29,1961 / Lewiston, ME USA)

What do you think this poem is about?

.Waking Up

We open our
Eyes only
because
God
is giving us
One
More
Chance.

Submitted: Thursday, June 14, 2007
Edited: Friday, March 11, 2011


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  • Yoonoos Peerbocus (7/14/2009 9:10:00 PM)

    compressed /deep and powerful all through

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  • Ashraful Musaddeq (9/29/2008 6:46:00 AM)

    Wow what a short and beautiful poem.10+

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  • Tanya Stanford (8/18/2008 4:10:00 AM)

    Short yet so dramatic. Lovely....

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  • Emancipation Planz (3/24/2008 2:29:00 AM)

    I'd be waking up but wherehave you been lately? Hope you are well.

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  • Ewigi Liebe (12/30/2007 11:39:00 AM)

    Sometimes short are better than long, cause its said straight on what its mean...love it thou...thank you very much for sharing.

    Mary

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  • Coreena Dejesus (11/9/2007 10:53:00 PM)

    Short but the words behind it mean so much. *Hugz** CC

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  • Egal Bohen (9/24/2007 10:18:00 AM)

    I like this one a lot!
    Egal..

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  • Anna Russell (8/2/2007 10:46:00 AM)

    Keep writing ones like this, and he'll be giving you plenty more. Loved it.
    Hugs
    Anna xxx

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  • Elysabeth Faslund (7/9/2007 9:31:00 AM)

    Short, with all the criticism of the world snuggled in between the lines! All the hope of that world too. Oh yeah, you did it again! Put your opponents, if any, down for the count of 8, if they don't believe this one! Well worth the read! ! ! xxElysabeth

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  • fanniesson - (6/21/2007 7:43:00 PM)

    nice one
    ..............

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