Walk Gently Stranger Poem by Thomas Golding

Thomas Golding

Thomas Golding

Lower Hutt. Wellington. New Zealand

Walk Gently Stranger

Rating: 3.7


This old house is sad
Reflecting the flow
Of the itinerant folk
Who gave it life
But didn’t care enough
To stop it aging.

Layers of paper
Palimpsests on the walls
Still life recordings
Furniture scraped
Overlays of hope
Each generation cries
Here we lived I and i.
Listen with your hand
Against the door
Pale voices of children
May be heard
A memory for old house
To play when lonely.

Near the floor by the window
A girl sobs without hope
Of comfort or release
Yet over there
She cries with passion.
This concerned passerby
Would reach out if he could
No being should be so alone.

Will the new residents be kind to my little house?
Will they be kind to my little ghost?
No more time for contemplation
Only leave whatever comfort may be willed
Awaiting entropy that thief of time
Whose step grinds all to dust
Bidding ephemeral all fear
Cause effect and pain
No time at all in the unending round.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Greenwolfe 1962 07 September 2008

The title is Walk Gently Stranger. There is no mention of these words in the written piece. This is a great irritation to me as a reader. It is like a bait and switch at some retail store. This never reflects well on either the writer or the field of writing he is a part of. I did not punish this piece for that but I think I might just do so in the future. This is a fine piece. Well done, worth remembering. GW62

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