Kranthi Pothineni


Walk this Night


Dark clouds will move
Light rays will come
Dark night will end
Bright day will start
But walk this night

Walk seeing its stars
Seeing its bright light
Seeing its white shine
It’s the beauty of night
So seen only in night

Walk seeing its moon
Seeing its moon light
Seeing its bright shine
It’s also beauty of night
So shines only in night

So walk this night
Walk seeing its light
And awake in light
Walk seeing its beauty
And awake in beauty

So walk this night
To wake in shine
If not the next day
It will be other day
For now walk this night

So move, said my heart

Submitted: Wednesday, April 29, 2009

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  • Rookie - 3 Points Dr Hitesh Sheth (5/1/2009 12:33:00 PM)

    Walk walk walk this night
    with all your might
    for other end is
    glorious light..............Good Write........... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 26 Points Joseph Poewhit (4/30/2009 7:26:00 AM)

    Very beautiful poem BUT many fear the night. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 15 Points Eyan Desir (4/30/2009 2:28:00 AM)

    Good flow
    Good write
    there dear poet (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 62 Points Kesav Easwaran (4/30/2009 2:22:00 AM)

    you bringt the idea inside your mind beautifully into this write, Kranthi...the night with its subdued light is a treat to watch no doubt...10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 69 Points Sathyanarayana M V S (4/30/2009 12:06:00 AM)

    The flow is good and the structure too. But there is some amount of redundancy, which you could have avoided. Even the imagery too hasnot taken a full shape. I'm sorry Kranthi to say this. (Report) Reply

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