Walk This Night Poem by Kranthi Pothineni
Walk This Night
Dark clouds will move
Light rays will come
Dark night will end
Bright day will start
But walk this night
Walk seeing its stars
Seeing its bright light
Seeing its white shine
It’s the beauty of night
So seen only in night
Walk seeing its moon
Seeing its moon light
Seeing its bright shine
It’s also beauty of night
So shines only in night
So walk this night
Walk seeing its light
And awake in light
Walk seeing its beauty
And awake in beauty
So walk this night
To wake in shine
If not the next day
It will be other day
For now walk this night
So move, said my heart
you bringt the idea inside your mind beautifully into this write, Kranthi...the night with its subdued light is a treat to watch no doubt...10
The flow is good and the structure too. But there is some amount of redundancy, which you could have avoided. Even the imagery too hasnot taken a full shape. I'm sorry Kranthi to say this.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/18/2024 6:59:52 AM # 1.0.0.1119
Walk walk walk this night with all your might for other end is glorious light..............Good Write...........