Kranthi Pothineni


Walk This Night - Poem by Kranthi Pothineni

Dark clouds will move
Light rays will come
Dark night will end
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Comments about Walk This Night by Kranthi Pothineni

  • Rookie - 3 Points Dr Hitesh Sheth (5/1/2009 12:33:00 PM)

    Walk walk walk this night
    with all your might
    for other end is
    glorious light..............Good Write........... (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 26 Points Joseph Poewhit (4/30/2009 7:26:00 AM)

    Very beautiful poem BUT many fear the night. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 15 Points Eyan Desir (4/30/2009 2:28:00 AM)

    Good flow
    Good write
    there dear poet (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 80 Points Kesav Easwaran (4/30/2009 2:22:00 AM)

    you bringt the idea inside your mind beautifully into this write, Kranthi...the night with its subdued light is a treat to watch no doubt...10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 89 Points Sathyanarayana M V S (4/30/2009 12:06:00 AM)

    The flow is good and the structure too. But there is some amount of redundancy, which you could have avoided. Even the imagery too hasnot taken a full shape. I'm sorry Kranthi to say this. (Report) Reply








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