Treasure Island

Kranthi Pothineni


Walk this Night


Dark clouds will move
Light rays will come
Dark night will end
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  • Dr Hitesh Sheth (5/1/2009 12:33:00 PM)

    Walk walk walk this night
    with all your might
    for other end is
    glorious light..............Good Write........... (Report) Reply

  • Kesav Easwaran (4/30/2009 2:22:00 AM)

    you bringt the idea inside your mind beautifully into this write, Kranthi...the night with its subdued light is a treat to watch no doubt...10 (Report) Reply

  • Sathyanarayana M V S (4/30/2009 12:06:00 AM)

    The flow is good and the structure too. But there is some amount of redundancy, which you could have avoided. Even the imagery too hasnot taken a full shape. I'm sorry Kranthi to say this. (Report) Reply

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