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////////Walking along the sea shore

Walking along the seashore
I could think but no more

You were doing my flying hair
With briskly strides front and rear

Hiding behind and running along
Nothing then seems will happen wrong

But alas it was love that never lasts
In the world of creed and caste

You left me and at the same place
I often come to find my lost grace

Submitted: Wednesday, August 26, 2009

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  • Sherif Monem (3/4/2010 10:54:00 PM)

    Very nice simple poem expresses passing by love.

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  • Seema Chowdhury (9/9/2009 9:21:00 AM)

    i hope you get the love of your life.
    good luck
    just don't give up.
    happy ramadan.

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  • Indira Babbellapati (8/26/2009 5:28:00 AM)

    the last two lines read great!

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  • Shams Tahir (8/26/2009 5:17:00 AM)

    love is a truth and also betrayed love

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