akram saqib

Rookie - 72 Points (14 APRIL / SAHIWAL)

Walking Along The Sea Shore - Poem by akram saqib

Walking along the seashore
I could think but no more

You were doing my flying hair
With briskly strides front and rear

Hiding behind and running along
Nothing then seems will happen wrong

But alas it was love that never lasts
In the world of creed and caste

You left me and at the same place
I often come to find my lost grace

Topic(s) of this poem: love

Comments about Walking Along The Sea Shore by akram saqib

  • Freshman - 532 Points Sherif Monem (3/4/2010 10:54:00 PM)

    Very nice simple poem expresses passing by love. (Report) Reply

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  • Silver Star - 4,154 Points Seema Chowdhury (9/9/2009 9:21:00 AM)

    i hope you get the love of your life.
    good luck
    just don't give up.
    happy ramadan. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 71 Points Indira Babbellapati (8/26/2009 5:28:00 AM)

    the last two lines read great! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Shams Tahir (8/26/2009 5:17:00 AM)

    love is a truth and also betrayed love (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, August 26, 2009

Poem Edited: Saturday, October 4, 2014

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