War....A Grey Matter....1914 Poem by karen sinclair

War....A Grey Matter....1914

Rating: 5.0


Dulling grey eyes scour the landscape slate
Charcoal skies
Tipped with dishonest
Silver linings
Our hero slowly dies
Slipping as
Uniforms dash past

Darts of scarlet
Scratch the hopeless land
And
Faint voices cut the silence
In vile desperation
Our hero
Sand
Merely a removable object
Soon to be forgotten

Soon to be replaced by summers opulence
Whilst I just sit and write?

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
I imagined being a war correspondant wondering my significance witnessing so many young die
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Smoky Hoss 04 November 2012

There's an essence of true humanity in these words; thoughts of how easy one can pass, and be passed by, so soon forgotten; My grandfather fought in W.W, I and my father in W.W.II, I wonder does anyone from that time, if still alive, ever even once recall their face or anything they may have said or done. GREAT poem, in my opinion!

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Chuck Audette 16 July 2012

Terrific piece! Horribly realistic, but contemplative.

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Danny Draper 13 July 2012

The seemingly disjointed flow like thoughts and observations punctuated by guns, bombs and endless numbing carnage. Then the admission, a realization that all things pass and the futility will remain in the ensuing seasons change and rolling years. A journalist could have experienced this, very well portrayed.

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Valerie Dohren 12 July 2012

Awesome - very moving. Great work, well done.

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