War Of Goodwill Poem by Dave Alan Walker

War Of Goodwill

Rating: 5.0


Sounds of thunder
wakes my soul
In the killing zone
we call this world

For the money
For the glory
For the murder
of a young son

Do we really need to kill
for peace and goodwill

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Nice piece there, ... Worthy to digest.. Bravo!

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Cosmic Dreamer 18 December 2011

I love this poem Dave... The act of violence shall never bring peace, the act of love and understanding is the only true path to peace... So for us humans, we may well be doomed. For I see no sign of either...

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Salema Khatun 18 December 2011

yours are good poem sir nice poem from the nice per son please read some of mine sir your comment is very necesary and important

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Vipins Puthooran 18 December 2011

Be silent! to violence we'll find there peace Live love and learn! ! A good poem! ! 10++

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i can feel the emotion of this nice poem! !

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Gajanan Mishra 15 March 2012

Very good poem Dave. I like your poems for its simile verse and clear connotation. Thanks. I invite you to read my new poems and comments. Yours Gajanan Mishra

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Jim Hogg 26 December 2011

Dave, you don't use a lot of words, but those you do use, you certainly use well to say what's important.

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Anita Wisniewska 25 December 2011

makes one stop & think.

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Smoky Hoss 24 December 2011

Powerful thoughts, wonderfully expressed.

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Unwritten Soul 23 December 2011

You never stop from stand for something, someone as it for justice..and high morality, that's make your poems so worth to read and a big piece to discover :) ..Hope sound of thunder not scare you but make you striking like it did...Great poem B.D_Unwritten SOul

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