! ! ! Warboral, Lotwarralll Poem by Raveendran N.V.

! ! ! Warboral, Lotwarralll

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Walking along the linear curve
He came to a rolling stop
And let out a silent scream.

The child of sweet sorrow
His only choice, of mild interest
His intense apathy was at even odds.

Old news with him, an open secret
May be definite and even at odds
He was clearly confused.

In acute dullness was he vaguely aware
Of the working vacation which made
The same difference

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Subbaraman N V 24 December 2007

A nice poem to enjoy! Thanks!

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Alison Cassidy 10 November 2007

This is a curious piece full of contradictions. With the absurdity of Alice in Wonderland, you capture the reader's creative spirit and give it a shake. Great poem. (the title confuses me?) love, Allie xxxx

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