Mike Sheriff

Rookie (15-10-85 / Belfast)

Wasted - Poem by Mike Sheriff

to him you talked
you left me to hang
foolish and mocked
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  • Rookie Greenwolfe 1962 (6/18/2008 12:38:00 PM)

    Technically, there is nothing wrong wuth this poem. So it is an 8 under
    any assessment a poet can make. I simply can't go higher though. That's because there is nothing extraordinary that would make it a 10 and it is rather
    simple from a rhyming standpoint, which makes it weak enough to make it less
    than a 9.

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