(17/08/96 / Malaysia)

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Water

Water, oh water
You go down my throat
Tip in a glass
You'll sink like a boat.

Water, oh water
You also clean me
Turn on the warm water
And fill me with glee

Water, oh water
Grow me a crop
Fruits and vegies
My mouth will drop.

Water, oh water
Let me swim
Dont let me drown
I already have water within.

Submitted: Monday, May 26, 2008
Edited: Monday, March 09, 2009

Comments about this poem (Water by Marin Christiana Richardt )

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  • A A (9/28/2008 6:44:00 PM)

    good poem i dont really have any advice to give but i have to say that your poem gots me an A for english, we had to memorize it.... so yea good poem

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  • WILLIAM SIENES III (5/26/2008 2:16:00 AM)

    This is a nice poem, Christiana. One advice- don't just stick to rhyme. Play with rhythm and length. Just keep writing. One poem at a time. Yes, one poem at a time. Like water, keep flowing.

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