Water Is Not Water Poem by JOE POEWHIT

Water Is Not Water

Rating: 5.0


Just not wet anymore.
Won't work as a door stop.
Must have some water.
WATER-WATER-WATER-WATER
In the baby bottle, SMALL BOTTLE-ok.
Just thirsty.
Want some cold WATER? ?
We don't have any water.
CRY-CRY-CRY, tears are water.
BUT-there not wet NOW.
TEARS NOT WET - TEARS NOT WET.
ACID RAIN no pain.
ACID RAIN no pain.
ACID RAIN no pain.
DRIP rain drops - DRIP.
Clouds full of ACID RAIN.
CRY-CRY-CRY-CRY.

11/24/2006 Joe Poewhit
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Epic X 22 May 2012

LOL^_^

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 03 August 2009

Some water that we've drank are equally dangerous as the acid rain; the alcohol! Its killing us a slow death.

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Carol Gall 09 June 2009

wonderful write acid rain true

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Vijay Menon 21 May 2009

nice lines, fine sentiments echoed

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Joe This is amazing! Repetition working spectacularly. We down under in Aussie land are in drought drought drought. Great unforgettable work! Karin Anderson

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