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Water Is Not Water - Poem by JOE POEWHIT

Just not wet anymore.
Won't work as a door stop.
Must have some water.
In the baby bottle, SMALL BOTTLE-ok.
Just thirsty.
Want some cold WATER? ?
We don't have any water.
CRY-CRY-CRY, tears are water.
BUT-there not wet NOW.
ACID RAIN no pain.
ACID RAIN no pain.
ACID RAIN no pain.
DRIP rain drops - DRIP.
Clouds full of ACID RAIN.

11/24/2006 Joe Poewhit - defunct


Comments about Water Is Not Water by JOE POEWHIT

  • Rookie Epic X (5/22/2012 12:50:00 PM)

    LOL^_^ (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 3 Points Sulaiman Mohd Yusof (8/3/2009 1:26:00 PM)

    Some water that we've drank are equally dangerous as the acid rain; the alcohol! Its killing us a slow death. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Carol Gall (6/9/2009 11:53:00 AM)

    wonderful write acid rain true (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Vijay Menon (5/21/2009 8:36:00 AM)

    nice lines, fine sentiments echoed (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Karin Anderson (sorry can't vote or comment) . (2/27/2009 8:14:00 PM)

    Joe This is amazing! Repetition working spectacularly. We down under in Aussie land are in drought drought drought. Great unforgettable work! Karin Anderson (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, February 20, 2009

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