Michelle Melody


Waving To Moments Passing By - Poem by Michelle Melody

Moments happy moments
people think about them
people write about them
people talk about them
people hope about them
I see moments
lots of moments
but I wave to my moments
as they pass me by...

My life is a ship
on an Ocean deep
passing by is the ship 'Could've been'
it holds all my moments in its keep
I stand on my lifes deck
waving to moments till they're just a speck

Moments happy moments
people live them
people grab them
people make them
people savour them
but I wave to my moments
as they pass me by...
Goodbye 'Could've been'
Goodbye moments...


Comments about Waving To Moments Passing By by Michelle Melody

  • Rookie Sonya Florentino (8/2/2009 6:00:00 AM)

    I know this ship well, Michelle... I swear I would have seen you there.... love the middle stanza.... (Report) Reply

    0 person liked.
    0 person did not like.
  • Rookie - 28 Points Laurie Hill (8/1/2009 7:01:00 AM)

    Goodbye moments, we've all had goodbye moments, so very well penned.... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie M L (1/15/2009 1:10:00 PM)

    Life consists of moments, thats why they are so significant. Way too many moments just pass by us. Nice poem! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Kite Remedy (1/14/2009 6:13:00 PM)

    well, yes, i think we must enjoy every moment in our lives..
    nice poem.. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 63 Points John Raubenheimer (1/12/2009 3:46:00 PM)

    Touching... sad, but funny too. (Report) Reply

Read all 5 comments »



Read this poem in other languages

This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.

I would like to translate this poem »

word flags

What do you think this poem is about?



Poem Submitted: Monday, January 12, 2009



[Hata Bildir]