Waving To Moments Passing By Poem by Michelle Melody

Waving To Moments Passing By

Rating: 2.8


Moments happy moments
people think about them
people write about them
people talk about them
people hope about them
I see moments
lots of moments
but I wave to my moments
as they pass me by...

My life is a ship
on an Ocean deep
passing by is the ship 'Could've been'
it holds all my moments in its keep
I stand on my lifes deck
waving to moments till they're just a speck

Moments happy moments
people live them
people grab them
people make them
people savour them
but I wave to my moments
as they pass me by...
Goodbye 'Could've been'
Goodbye moments...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sonya Florentino 02 August 2009

I know this ship well, Michelle... I swear I would have seen you there.... love the middle stanza....

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Laurie Hill 01 August 2009

Goodbye moments, we've all had goodbye moments, so very well penned....

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M L 15 January 2009

Life consists of moments, thats why they are so significant. Way too many moments just pass by us. Nice poem!

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Kite Remedy 14 January 2009

well, yes, i think we must enjoy every moment in our lives.. nice poem..

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John Raubenheimer 12 January 2009

Touching... sad, but funny too.

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