[way Of Escape] Poem by Tiffany ThePirate

[way Of Escape]

Rating: 5.0


Loneliness and depression
Pain and despair
All of these things i feel
And there's no one there to care

There are some who listen
But they only hear words
They don't really understand
Im not even sure they can

Its like no matter what i say
They tell me i'm fine, I'll be ok
Hello! Did i miss something?
My life is a constant pain
And when i tell them
I'm made to feel ashamed

I can't help what i feel
My life has lost all zeal
Lifes just not the same
I feel as if im going insane

I just want this gone
I need a way of escape
Something not harmful
Something to take the pains place

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Afzal Shauq 14 December 2009

well done.. liked the idea..which is very rich and heart touching 10/10

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Allan O 20 November 2009

another beautiful writing...but you simply restated what you did thru a couple of others..the lord and family...is always the way of escape...wonderful.. ~^..^

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