Way To A Home…. Poem by SALINI NAIR

Way To A Home….

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Vehicle moves with a thrift or thrust
Feels as a part of eternity
Views that march and flash inward
Pleasing or spiteful sometimes
Pensiveness that cage these sights

Trees move backward abruptly
Mind rejoice in natures lap
Pensive mood that seize sometimes
Lament trip to the empty heart
Need to return to the shore of love

Need a nest to laugh and grieve
Afar Abode of Peace and love
Shrink all vigor and mind withdraws
Thirst for rest that reign inside
Fed up the journey took long time

There remains a sweet dream home
Abundant love that prevails inside
Laws forbidden on its ladders
Arguments can rest in shaded corner
A call that thrills and rejuvenates inside

Need to reach thereat early time
Before midnight at time of sleep
Need to travel a long coldness
Stars that marvel this long ride
To reach the bed for a silent sleep! ! ! !

©2014 SALINI.S.NAIR. All rights reserved

Monday, November 17, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: home
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 17 November 2014

Home sweet home all long to be home early or late to feel at eternal rest........Salini......nice composition on home with touching and sweet words......amazing piece

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Valsa George 17 November 2014

The thought that a sweet home awaits us is a refreshing one where love will be received and given in abundance! The more we crave to reach it at the earliest, the longer may seem the journey to it! A sweet write Salini!

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Kee Thampi 18 November 2014

our home is really a home of peace and love to be there where we born Need to return to the shore of love Need a nest to laugh and grieve Afar Abode of Peace and love I love to read more

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Akhtar Jawad 18 November 2014

Home is a place where an individual is at liberty to pass his life at his own sweet will. All the roads lead to Rome but one, the road of a peaceful sleep leads to home.

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Heather Wilkins 12 December 2014

home sweet home where we all long to be nice writing

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Gangadharan Nair Pulingat 24 November 2014

A long life journey and its supposed events imagined in the poem I think. However it makes itself wonderful.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 18 November 2014

Body is the vehicle but driver soul is the part of eternity. Mind rejoices in nature's lap because body is brought up from nature. Need to travel with long coldness a long distance of life. Wonderful composition and philosophical poem really.

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Amitava Sur 18 November 2014

Thirst for rest that reign inside ..... yes and that pleasing peace remains in own house only. Thanks for sharing

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 18 November 2014

A poem deep with its own meaning- yet- Need to travel a long coldnessStars that marvel this long rideTo reach the bed for a silent sleep! nice write

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