We Need To Change Poem by luciana isabelle

We Need To Change

Rating: 5.0


The wind is shaking the window
breeze smoothly through my skin
i look at the sky
and the star was twinkling beautifully
it shines in the darkness very perfectly
can we be like it?

when the moment came
we both will be apart
searching our dreams
perhaps are a stranger one day
you and me
both of us have different path in life
the path that we will need to choose
what path is it?

things are unique...
but humans are more than unique....
saying that they learn from mistakes
was totally a hypocrite!
keep feeling regret
wanna do better and better
but failed to do so
and at last, we are what we were before
change nothing
and being an egoistic forever
what do we achieve at last?
Seeing others achieved those success while we stay as the failure

WE ARE WHAT WE ARE
thus, the only one that can possibly change us is us...

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
created for a special friend that i think of as my twin in my life, Norazah Norddin. May Allah Bless.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mohammad Khosravi 05 October 2018

very beautiful. You put words together very beautiful. like pro

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Utsav Patel 08 November 2013

Wow! What a nice piece. Just loved it... you know when I was reading it, I constantly comparing myself to those lines. And those lines were.so true... Kudos luciana. :)

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Khairul Ahsan 17 October 2013

''WE ARE WHAT WE ARE'' thus, the only one that can possibly change us is us... ' This is an absolute truth!

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Abhishek Mishra 13 October 2013

Lovely poem..you bring a real colour into it: -) .a 10/10 I must rate it: -)

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Gajanan Mishra 10 October 2013

seeing others achieved, good write, thanks. I invite you to read my poems and comment.

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