The wind is shaking the window
breeze smoothly through my skin
i look at the sky
and the star was twinkling beautifully
it shines in the darkness very perfectly
can we be like it?
when the moment came
we both will be apart
searching our dreams
perhaps are a stranger one day
you and me
both of us have different path in life
the path that we will need to choose
what path is it?
things are unique...
but humans are more than unique....
saying that they learn from mistakes
was totally a hypocrite!
keep feeling regret
wanna do better and better
but failed to do so
and at last, we are what we were before
change nothing
and being an egoistic forever
what do we achieve at last?
Seeing others achieved those success while we stay as the failure
WE ARE WHAT WE ARE
thus, the only one that can possibly change us is us...
Wow! What a nice piece. Just loved it... you know when I was reading it, I constantly comparing myself to those lines. And those lines were.so true... Kudos luciana. :)
''WE ARE WHAT WE ARE'' thus, the only one that can possibly change us is us... ' This is an absolute truth!
Lovely poem..you bring a real colour into it: -) .a 10/10 I must rate it: -)
seeing others achieved, good write, thanks. I invite you to read my poems and comment.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
very beautiful. You put words together very beautiful. like pro