We Passed Eachother Poem by Brandon Lucero

We Passed Eachother

Rating: 4.6


You wanted more?
Well life's a bore.
I'm not sorry.
Just wanted to say, I don't hate you anymore.
You tried your best and it wasn't enough.

Death was calling but nobody answered.
We passed each other by on the street,
death smiled that uneasy wicked smile,
not today.

I was broken, beaten and scarred.
Bloody and toxic, raped of life.
Always my fault, always my doing, I can't complain.

Soul forged in a lake of fire.
Who knew such evil could give birth to such good?
I am an infant born anew every minute.

Monday, June 22, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: death
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bernard F. Asuncion 08 February 2018

Brandon, such a great poem... congrats for being chosen...10+++

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Bharati Nayak 08 February 2018

It could be death of a relationship- - - - - -

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Chinedu Dike 08 February 2018

An insightful piece written from the heart. Thanks for sharing Brandon.

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Lyn Paul 08 February 2018

I see a little of myself in these words. You have achieved a lot. I Enjoyed reading your poem of the day. Good luck.

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Anil Kumar Panda 08 February 2018

'Soul forged in a lake of fire. Who knew such evil could give birth to such good? I am an infant born anew every minute. '..is such a nice write. Enjoy the poem on certainty of death.

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Gangadharan Nair Pulingat 08 February 2018

Death the assured end of all living beings and a fact of destiny. great.

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Edward Kofi Louis 08 February 2018

Death smiled that uneasy wicked smile! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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