We Will Make Graveyard Poem by Aftab Alam

We Will Make Graveyard

Rating: 4.1


Mom, bring the Tom.
Jerry all round here,
How should I read the word?
Jerry killed the alphabet,
This book is dust now.
Mama. Take me there,
I will slide, mom
There, on the kid’s park.
I will glide mom,
No Spike to bark,
Come with me Mom,
Bring home,
One for me,
The Tom, mom,
Wanna to see,
The game of killing,
Wanna to play with
The dead Jerry, mom
Bring the Tom, Mom.
Dead jerry will be buried
At the backyard.
Wanna to make graveyard
Mom, bring me Tom….



(For a Child: Care must be taken and guide them properly)

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
The problem never with the children but the way of bringing up, as we sow so we reap.(My request here it must be recited as child, I wrote on their fashion it will be my pleasure)
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Shahzia Batool 12 April 2013

Very good! there's also a need to promote the tendency of writing juvenile poems...

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David Wood 10 April 2013

A lovely poem. It really is important to foster love in our children

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