try
don't
give in
won't
fight
hide
lie down
you die
(7.5.06)
Esther, I suspect this has come from somewhere deep. Curious poem. What triggered it, the reader wonders... which makes it a fine poem. incidentally, I hate the word 'try'. love, Allie xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
ELEVEN WORDS...PRACTICED BY TOO MANY PEOPLE WHEN THEY ARE TOLD THERE IS NO HOPE OR THEY SELF-INLICT THAT NOTION ON THEMSELVES PRE-MATURELY....SOBERING PIECE OF FINE WORK, ESTHER ''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''FRANK/FJR
What a funny little quirky poem that says so much in so few words! Right to the point, and well done!
Dear Esther You write from a deep place and your feelings are well displayed, don't give in, Love duncan X
Esther, you got straight to the point on this one, absolutely no wavering. Well said. Brian
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Was this a poetry-in-motion submission? Has that cryptic feel from the reductionist writing... -chuck