Weakness Poem by Esther Leclerc

Weakness

Rating: 5.0


try
don't

give in
won't

fight
hide

lie down
you die


(7.5.06)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chuck Audette 07 July 2006

Was this a poetry-in-motion submission? Has that cryptic feel from the reductionist writing... -chuck

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Alison Cassidy 25 August 2006

Esther, I suspect this has come from somewhere deep. Curious poem. What triggered it, the reader wonders... which makes it a fine poem. incidentally, I hate the word 'try'. love, Allie xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

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ELEVEN WORDS...PRACTICED BY TOO MANY PEOPLE WHEN THEY ARE TOLD THERE IS NO HOPE OR THEY SELF-INLICT THAT NOTION ON THEMSELVES PRE-MATURELY....SOBERING PIECE OF FINE WORK, ESTHER ''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''FRANK/FJR

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Scarlett Treat 10 July 2006

What a funny little quirky poem that says so much in so few words! Right to the point, and well done!

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Duncan Wyllie 09 July 2006

Dear Esther You write from a deep place and your feelings are well displayed, don't give in, Love duncan X

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Brian Dorn 08 July 2006

Esther, you got straight to the point on this one, absolutely no wavering. Well said. Brian

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