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Whisperkwane Lamb
(8/5/2009 2:06:00 PM) |
All bright eyed and bushed tailed...off little red ridinghood went...and then she read your poem...now she cries two sets of tears...your kind and the kind of the wolf...and yet those wolf cries still play out into day's world.
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Lynda Robson
(8/4/2009 7:58:00 AM) |
An excellent write and so true,
10
Lynda XX
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Sherri Coulter
(8/3/2009 3:23:00 PM) |
thank for sharing - going to my favorite list to read again and again- : ( 10+
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Naseer Ahmed Nasir
(8/3/2009 5:31:00 AM) |
Message from Mary Spain:
From: Mary Spain (United Kingdom ;)
To: Naseer Ahmed Nasir
Date Time: 8/3/2009 4: 30: 00 AM (GMT -6: 00)
Subject: Hello
Naseer - I have just read 'Weep Holes'. A very fine and thought-provoking poem, which needs to be read and re-read to be fully appreciated. At least the mud didn't clog your mind, there's a clear, crystal stream of perception flowing through the poem.
Mary
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@....Frozen peices of Memory....@
(8/1/2009 9:53:00 PM) |
A very interesting peice of work
i love the penmenship
your voice showers with colors
true work of art^^
keep writing
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N Olmedo
(8/1/2009 3:00:00 PM) |
Quite the thought provoking poem Naseer, i love it all. Not much to say left other then i agree with all the wonderful comments. Thank you for sharing your talent with us. :)
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Nihar ...
(8/1/2009 10:14:00 AM) |
Bonfire conflagrations ignite every where
Smoke has turned the flowers black
Butterflies' wings look ashen
The dream's face will bend under pressure
And break into smithereens
I liked these lines..... and the following ones... poem is very nice.... thx for inspiring me........ :)
and my name means a grey cloud seen around mountain before rain..
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