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Pranab k Chakraborty (7/23/2010 3:20:00 AM)
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So many lines I can quote to represent our time, our living, our civilization.So many are there...... a single line deserves 50 pages article at least.....'Wind even now expects to blow the leaves away'.....it could be a caption of the whole.....'People drink blood of their own climes / And grow like germs'......such a horrible experience we always facing in our third world life every moment.....'Smoke has turned the flowers black / Butterflies' wings look ashen'......what more we breath from this earth now......pollution in air, in social life, ethical and spiritual also looks ashen.......so...so....
Salute you poet...I salute your talent and the sensitive human heart you bear at least to cry for the lonely criers. Poet, Be your feet heavy on earth and last long.....long....
Regards my warm regards,
10+++++
pranab
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wild forest- E- (12/17/2009 9:47:00 PM)
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i like it......! ! ! very intresting.
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Whisperkwane Lamb (8/5/2009 2:06:00 PM)
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All bright eyed and bushed tailed...off little red ridinghood went...and then she read your poem...now she cries two sets of tears...your kind and the kind of the wolf...and yet those wolf cries still play out into day's world.
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Lynda Robson (8/4/2009 7:58:00 AM)
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An excellent write and so true,
10
Lynda XX
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Sherri Coulter (8/3/2009 3:23:00 PM)
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thank for sharing - going to my favorite list to read again and again- : ( 10+
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Naseer Ahmed Nasir (8/3/2009 5:31:00 AM)
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Message from Mary Spain:
From: Mary Spain (United Kingdom ;)
To: Naseer Ahmed Nasir
Date Time: 8/3/2009 4: 30: 00 AM (GMT -6: 00)
Subject: Hello
Naseer - I have just read 'Weep Holes'. A very fine and thought-provoking poem, which needs to be read and re-read to be fully appreciated. At least the mud didn't clog your mind, there's a clear, crystal stream of perception flowing through the poem.
Mary
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/Drea ~Princess/ (8/1/2009 9:53:00 PM)
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A very interesting peice of work
i love the penmenship
your voice showers with colors
true work of art^^
keep writing
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N Olmedo (8/1/2009 3:00:00 PM)
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Quite the thought provoking poem Naseer, i love it all. Not much to say left other then i agree with all the wonderful comments. Thank you for sharing your talent with us. :)
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