Weightless Crow Dances Poem by Vidi Writes

a lovely sight it must have been...they don't get disturbed i guess...wind is theur floor

vidi ji ur a master at gazing out the window and giving us the scene in verse with great flourish very nice lines cheers

now i know most people think that crow is a ugly creature.. hey if you watched the recently concluded test match between srilanka and pakistan.. the cameraman captured a beautiful scene of crows bathing in water.. that's a beautiful scene indeed/.... well it may be bit odd to say 'ohh look at that beautiful crow! ! ! ! '.. but i ll tell you ma'am you v painted a beautiful picture indeed.. great artist can portray any thing in a manner that can please the reader's heart! ! ! ! with love shan

Beautifully composed poem, vidhi!

symbolic profound poem...10+++

Vidi, keen observation and good imagery! - Raj Nandy

You are an excellent imagist.I have always admired crows. Their bravery in the face of adversity is legendary. Warm regards, Sandra

Of the three..mighty wind, weighty branch, weightless crow..you mean to say the crow wins...? correct..I agree 10+++

the crow and the swaying branch...i admire your observing quality Vidi...not forgetting the quality of the imagery you bring in your write...thanks...10

Nice work and sometimes the crow sleeping under the safeguard of its inner vigelence too...., and sometimes the dead bunches also, good message, thanks 10++