Welcome Poem by lily peace lago every by to ph

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Winning her heart standing on the open terrace
Enchanting her sweet name in her ears
Landed the vibrant shiver in her
Caught in the mirror carrying above
Obviously surrendering both of us
Mighty strength collapsed
Ecstasy in our eyes filled with glittering shy....

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rakesh Bedi 19 October 2009

another lovely poem from you, lago lago....thanks for sharing....

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Kesav Easwaran 22 October 2009

secret romance in the open terrace...your poem transmits lovely feelings...thanks

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Sadiqullah Khan 31 October 2009

This is an eastern welcome, very true. Nowadays the fashion is simply saying Hi.Which I like or saying nothing at all.10++

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Sandhya S N 30 October 2009

Very nice poem regards sandhya

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Eyan Desir 29 October 2009

Interesting and fine poem

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Indira Renganathan 29 October 2009

Hope no one is silently watching behind....your writing this can make the reader (especially south indian) visualise a mottai-maadi romance easily...well done

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 24 October 2009

Obviously surrendering both of us Mighty strength collapsed Ecstasy in our eyes filled with glittering shy.....natural physical attraction and enjoyment and feelingshy later on when caught...lovely poem to beenjoyed by young people....10 read mine..love at first sight....friend in mirror...miss i miss you

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