! ! Were I In Heaven, We'D Be Able To Dance Together! ! Poem by kite remedy

! ! Were I In Heaven, We'D Be Able To Dance Together! !

Rating: 3.2


I plunk at a beach,
silence herein,
I am, bit by bit,
shredded by winds

I pause all alone,
nowhere to go,
as if I were lost,
in a crossroad

Fall on my knees,
and it is you I see
dancing gracefully
in a place I can't be

Flash before me,
our memories,
I close my eyes
and it's I perceive,

But, piece by piece,
those memories,
fading away,
leaving me at a bay

Silence hurts me,
tears me apiece
but inside my heart,
there goes a story

won't ever last,
though my body
is torn apiece
by winds before me....

'All of our trance,
won't ever end
Until we can dance,
together again'

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
<font color =fusha>Amy 07 February 2009

fantastic piece great to read- keeps reader interested :)

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sumaira .....ir 11 February 2009

wonderful poem nicely write i really enjoyed

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Estrella Baldemosa 11 February 2009

I think this is good poem...good job

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Kesav Easwaran 12 February 2009

good poem, Kite...pleasing verses...i liked...10

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Kranthi Pothineni 12 February 2009

beautiful... made me to read again and again...good

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Indira Babbellapati 13 February 2009

a touching wish...! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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rago rago 13 February 2009

Really fantastic and throbing.

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beautiful my brother. absolutely

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Dr Hitesh Sheth 12 February 2009

'All of our trance, won't ever end Until we can dance, together again' wonderful lines..............

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Joseph Poewhit 12 February 2009

Reads like a dance of love

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