What A Day? ? ? Poem by Randhir kaur

What A Day? ? ?

Rating: 4.8


I was elated and the whole throng,
Girls were clamourning a cheers song.
We frabjously watching the cricket match,
One after one enjoyed the defenders catch..
My team won the target,
Hollering high like never willing to forget.
People saw our lively craze,
Thought we would never win the first race..
Second was the round and fielding was ours,
But I went fret, lost my glasses, finding for hours.
Everything seemed unseen for me.
Everyone thinking of how will I play and see..
A girl lended her specs,
Took it n gave returns on cheeks with pecks.
Playing but thinking it was very expensive.
And my mother will slay me, there I went
pensive..
Exhausted and remained silent after lossing,
Sat down glumly with wet eyes in a way
displeasing.
Swagata yelled, ur opticals are here,
There I won the match when my buddies chase
after me for a cheer..

What A Day? ? ?
Sunday, January 24, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: sports
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
It is my experience of Sports day..freting at the same time an enjoyable day..I will never forget that day.. Swagata just a big LOL..
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Randhir Kaur 14 June 2016

Thank you Evensong, Soul Watcher, Kelly Kurt, Mohammed Asim Nehal, Kim Barney and Kishore Kumar Das for your lovely kind words. I am just overwhelmed and cannot explain my happiness. This is possible all because of your love and support, for your respect and appreciation. I love writing, I am not a poet but you all made me so. Ever many thanks to each and everyone. Loads of love and hugs. Stay tuned.

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M Asim Nehal 14 June 2016

Memories are hard to erase, Wonderful poem, Randhirji...Loved it.10

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Kelly Kurt 14 June 2016

A memory that I hope lasts a lifetime.

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Kishore Kumar Das 03 June 2016

Nice interpretation of life....failure is not so easy to digest...but here our wisdom comes to rescue....in this connection, may I request you to read my poem ' I have not failed' based on the famous quotes of Edison.....your poem is a corollary to success only...

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Randhir Kaur 10 June 2016

Thanks Edward for the feedback. Thank you Kishore Sir for your words..Yes, I will definitely fix my eyes on yours..Keep reading.

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Siddartha Montik 12 January 2017

the joy and pain of a sport Event. well expressed with. fulll heart. enjoyed reading the lines. and. expression. with heart.! ! thank you poet.! !

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Edward Kofi Louis 14 September 2016

Clamourning a cheer song! ! Nice piece of work.

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Randhir Kaur 10 July 2016

Thank you Kaul Sir. Peace.

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Tribhawan Kaul 10 July 2016

A vibrant with a nostalgic touch...lovely.

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Randhir Kaur 17 June 2016

Many many thanks Rajnish Manga, Sk Nurul Huda, Unnikrishnan ES for your warm felicitation. Peace to hear such words. Keep reading. Stay connected.

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