'What About You? ' Poem by Gabriel Anspach

'What About You? '

Rating: 4.2


Cesspool of thought
Abstract, I'm caught
Insightful pain
Am I even sane?

I walk through my thoughts
I think, I think
I feel, I feel
I die, I die

So catch me up
Run me to the finish line
Give me an outcome
Give me a sign

But what about you?
I cry
But for who?
But what about you?
What about you...?

Wednesday, October 26, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: lost love
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Confused about your feelings toward another. Whether this relationship is right for you. You love them, but they hurt you.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Shivangi Mariam 27 October 2016

What attracts me towards this poem is its lyrical quality and your meditative thinking. Keep on writing, let poetry come to you, Gabriel!

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Gabriel Anspach 09 November 2016

Thank you! ! Is there anything you would suggest?

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