Are you the wind that ruffles
a silent day?
I was walking,
and I thought I heard you rustle trees
and toss leaves
upon the autumn.
Are you September's equinox?
I was dreaming
and I thought I saw your silhouette
paint the fire
of fall.
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Very emotional and touching. Sometimes, life lives us wondering of one thing or the other. You have expressed this beautifully......good job!
I understand from the poem's 'topic' and your note that the poem is written in remembrance of a demised friend named Tommy Oh. The poignant thoughts expressed in the poem are indeed touchy. Well written.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Beautifully written. This poem is very emotional.