What Can Be Secret......... Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

What Can Be Secret.........

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What can be secret of longitivity?
Has it to do something with continuity?
Any living being has to be continuous
Life is to betaken as challenge with seriousness

You stop breathing and life is over
Close the eyes and loose the cover
Anything you miss and chance is lost
Life counts each moment and survives the most

I want to live and breathe the fresh air
Concentration full with no split hair
Worry and dullness leaving apart
Complete movement with joy and look smart

I want to be simple and honest
So close to HIM after offering the best
May it be as difficult as acid test?
Still will be smooth as life rest

What have I to do with worldly things?
It has no use for me to be used as something
With bare minimum need for use
It may serve more and not defuse

World is demanding more and more
Situation was not bad as this before
Income less and expenses rising
More unnatural deaths really surprising

It may not bother me as individual
I may take it simple and casual
It may not look sound and unusual
We have to play simple but no role dual

It may bring some sanity
Life so close to the reality
Real happiness with joy and amity
To lead a life with honour and simplicity

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lalvani Rekha 26 August 2009

You stop breathing and life is over Close the eyes and loose the cover....10

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Indani Narayan 26 August 2009

What can be secret of longitivity? Has it to do something with continuity? Any living being has to be continuous....10

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Severina Dsouza 26 August 2009

World is demanding more and more Situation was not bad as this before.....10

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Prince Obed de la Cruz 27 August 2009

good one! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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Darshna Chopra 27 August 2009

You stop breathing and life is over Close the eyes and loose the cover...............10

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Adrianne Colton 23 November 2009

It may bring some sanity Life so close to the reality 10

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Ketan Rajgor 22 October 2009

You stop breathing and life is over Close the eyes and loose the cover Anything you miss and chance is lost

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Kamlesh Ambalal 08 September 2009

It may not bother me as individual I may take it simple and casual

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Suresh Vakil 30 August 2009

want to be simple and honest So close to HIM after offering the best May it be as difficult as acid test?

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Santoksingh Jadeja 30 August 2009

want to live and breathe the fresh air Concentration full with no split hair

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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