What Do I Want? ? Poem by Erica Burke

What Do I Want? ?

Rating: 5.0


I want you to...

Hold me when I'm crying,
And even when I'm not,
Love me when I'm lying,
And I'll try to quit my pot.

I need you to...

Love me when I'm broken,
And kiss me when in pain,
Your love will be my token,
And this love won't be in vain.

I'd love for you to...

Give me flowers every day,
And buy me chocolates too,
But more then that I want you to lay,
In bed, just me and you.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Christine Kerr 24 April 2009

Love the rhyming and flow that you show Erica. You've opened the door, So bring on more. 10++

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Mel Vincent Basconcillo 22 April 2009

romantic and lovely..u words and emotions are immaculate and genuine..beautiful write..and so are you! well done! bravo!

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Erica Burke

Erica Burke

Port Huron, MI
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