*what Does It Mean? * Poem by negar shahnouri

*what Does It Mean? *

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When you say that you love me, I don't believe it
& when you don't say, I feel i need it.
What does it mean?

When you are with me, you want to go to others
& when you go, you tell 'em im your love
What does it mean?

When you are alone you wish i come to you
&when im there, you wanna be alone
What does it mean?

When i cry for our love, you say you don't need my tears
& when i talk about its end, you cry
What does it mean?

When i ask if we marry or not, you say by god willing
&when god wants, you still need time!
What does it mean?

When the weather is rainy, you ask me to walk with you under the rain
&when i say lets go, you complain about your little umbrella
What does it mean?

When you write a poem for a woman, you say it does not prove you love her
&when i get upset because of that, you compose a poem to show me your love
What does it mean?

When i want you to do s.th for me, you say you don't like i order you
&when i tell you my request, you say you hate begging
What does it mean?

When you feel I'm in love, you go for attracting other women
&when i hide my feeling, you call me heartless
What does it mean?
What does it mean?
What does it mean?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Reihaneh Jalalian 20 December 2008

wonderful negar. a great poem i loved it. well done

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Robert Melliard 19 December 2008

This is full of the kind of contradictions love usually seems to hold, and perhaps the person you describe is hard to please, too. I'm not sure if you should repeat 'What does it mean? ' so often. Best wishes, Robert.

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Myriam Karam 09 December 2008

i luv it! ! it expresses wt's deep inside, , , somtimes the person cnt say wt does he/she feels so they just write it down.. gd luck

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