What Doesnt Kill You! Poem by Heaz Rha'el

What Doesnt Kill You!

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On this metal wheeled bed he laid,
With every single breath delayed....
With life and death he struggled, day and night,
He wasn't going to give up, not without a fight....

It happened few hours back,
When he got hit by a heart attack...
It was the worst part of his day,
What doesn't kill you, makes you stronger, they say...

Just yesterday with his little daughter he played,
She asked a promise, he said he'd stayed...
Now and forever was that which he did made,
And now slowly, everything seem to fade.....

He once told her, love makes you longer,
What doesn't kill you, makes you stronger....
That which she believed now makes her wonder,
Yeah, it didn't kill him, but were his strength are?

On his feet, he still can't,
So weak and pale like an infant.....
Looked like he'd die in an instant,
What doesn't kill you, he said could make you a giant.....

She stared long, and his pale dying smile she met,
Then she realized what he never said but meant.....
Sometimes what doesn't kill you,
Could leave you half-dead, he probably knew....
Could take life away and make you unhealthy....
And death it'd make you wish already!

Monday, October 17, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: poems
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Poem About A Dying Father
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Maveriqué Richard 25 October 2016

Nice write. I love your sense of Imagery.

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Heaz Rha'el 25 March 2017

Thanks a lot Richard

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Heaz Rha'el 25 March 2017

Thank you Richard... I appreciate

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Zwelethu Siwaphiwe Shweni 17 October 2016

It is real, what doesn't kill makes you strong. But the lady here in this poem strengthened by the hard and most hurtful way, death of her loved one. Although I was sad, but i enjoyed reading it. Welcome to poem hunter man, and I am looking forward to read your next poems, keep it up man.

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Heaz Rha'el 17 October 2016

thank you Zwelethu Siwaphiwe Shweni...

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