What I Didn'T Know Poem by Diana Holinski

What I Didn'T Know

Rating: 4.5


I never knew
Anyone else could know me
Anyone else would recognize me
Or love me

I never knew
I could feel the swells of passion
That I would ever know how it felt
To carry the serene knowledge
That I was loved

Until you told me with your eyes

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Greenwolfe 1962 27 June 2008

I almost gave this a 9 but I gave it an 8 instead. I can't really say for sure. This writing has everything it needs but there is something here I just couldn't find. Perhaps, it was some kind of extra substance. I just don't know what it was. The main thing is, that what was there is just fine. GW62

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James B. Earley 22 June 2008

The eyes will never deceive! Excellent. Please read 'Ecstasy.'

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