What I See Poem by Timothy David

What I See



Let me tell you what I see
The broken rocks and flattened trees
It's such a saddening sight for me
To watch the mountains crumble
To the sea

Now let me tell you what I hear
The sounds of sadness and falling tears
For the meaning of which is just not clear
Can you tell us all what’s happened here

Let me tell you now what I can smell
The smell of death and shot gun shells
Human flesh burning on the grill
Do you believe the world should be like hell

Let me say how it makes me feels
To Think our world is eating it's last meal
If we finally found it's Achilles heel
Why'd you call for the devil to strike a deal

This I what I think the world should do
Point our fingers at all the men like you
We should wake up from this dream and get rid of those who
Manipulate the many to benefit the few

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Pari Dharawat 21 November 2011

Beautiful...and well meaning poem... structured writing, with nice sound to it, with a gloom picture to everyone it greets Keep Writing

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