What I Want Poem by Loretta Doyle Smalley

What I Want

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I want to get through high school.
I want to go to college.
I want to get a good job and make something of myself.
I want my dreams to come true.
I want to keep my best-friends as I make new ones.
I want to make my dad and older sister and her two kids proud of me.
That's what I want.

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***** ***** 09 May 2005

Loretta, I think you could make more out of this poem. You have complied a list, but take away the repetition and ask yourself, what do you REALLY want and therein lies the poem. Sx

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Loretta Doyle Smalley

Loretta Doyle Smalley

Grant Hospital Columbus, Ohio
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