What I Would Not Give Poem by Eduardo Santibanez

What I Would Not Give

Rating: 4.4


For one more morning with my bride
And to wake up by her side
She to be before my eyes
While we lay as the sun rise

For one more moment of delight
As I lay with her at night
She to be last thing I see
Before dreams begin to be

For her to be in my bed
As the suns and moons go dead
While we lay in bed entwined
With her heart right next to mine

For a chance to change the past
And to this time make it last
To change this dreaded fate
As we something new create

Saturday, August 1, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: break up,love,love and loss,past
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 12 August 2015

Beautifully penned love poem with nice rhyme scheme. A well articulated piece of poetry from the heart. Thanks for sharing Eduardo. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Roseann Shawiak 03 August 2015

Touched my heart with this beautiful poem Eduardo! You speak so tenderly and quietly of such a deep and abiding love. An eloquent rendering of your love, thank you for sharing it. RoseAnn

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Eduardo Santibanez 04 August 2015

Thank you for your comment. I appreciate it

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Kelly Kurt 02 August 2015

A lovely poem, Eduardo. Thanks

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Eduardo Santibanez 04 August 2015

Thanks to you for your comment and for reading

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Allotey Abossey 02 August 2015

Love is a beautiful thing, so is your poem... Good work

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Eduardo Santibanez 04 August 2015

Thanks, love indeed is beautiful, love is pure, but sadly we are the ones who corrupt it and turn it into pain and suffering.

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