What if god asks us to make a wish.....?
Then why don't we make a wish to
forget what is foe,
And why don’t we just let it go.
What we get when we make war,
Coz a door to friend is not so far.
What if god asks us to make a wish.....?
Then why don't we make a wish to
forget what is failure,
And why are we always in tear.
Let’s tell failure simple nope,
Coz there is always a hope.
What if god asks us to make a wish.....?
Then why don't we make a wish to
forget what is differentiation,
And why are we in such misconception.
Dreaming the whole world one I can dare,
Coz making it apart is not so fair.
What if god asks us to make a wish.....?
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Love the optimism in your poem. Good job, thanks for sharing
‘Lets tell failure simple nope, Coz there is always a hope.’ ~ Ma’am excellent poetry will pump in calorie of self confidence in 'dense'…great write for youngs especially …enjoyed much Poet Anita…thanks sharing.. Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10
What if god ask us to make a wish.....? v nice one to prob mind.one ponders over issues but gets no where, ......nicelyput all....10 read mine..i miss...national sentiments
I always like reading questioning poems.......They are not forcing any ideas, rather they give a chance 4 2nd thought......well done
'Than why don't we make a wish to forget what is differentation, And why are we in such misconception.' Good questions here - a good poem to get one thinking :)
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
What if God ask us tomake a wish. nice Anita you begin with forgetting the evil done by the enemies. nice start.. forget falure and be positive in life. dreaming of the world as one.. nice ideas.. thank u for sharing. God bless you.