What Is It That I Love? Poem by Nicole Garcia

What Is It That I Love?

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if anybody was to ask
what is it that i love about him
i would say its the shine in his eyes
that makes me smile
the tone of his voice
that makes me feel like I'm listening to my favorite song
and i wanna repeat that song cause i love it to much
the softness of his hair
that makes him look cute
the smile he gives me
when i look his way.
when he raps me around his arms
i feel warm
and i know he doesn't wanna let me go
he is soft and warm
something like a teddy bear '
some what i feel SAFE when I'm in his arms 3
the taste of his lips
when we kiss
mint i believe.
and as he walks away
i know i can run after him.
to be with him forever.
those are the things i love about him
about Bryan 3

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Connor Leyden 21 November 2009

I think it's sweet. But, you could have done a little more proofreading.

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