What Is Perfection (Senryu) Poem by Edwin Tanguma

What Is Perfection (Senryu)



What Is Perfection (Senryu)

What is perfection
Can it even be achieved
We are not perfect

Edwin Tanguma 2/28/2015

Sunday, March 1, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: silly
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Patricia Grantham 15 March 2015

No one is perfect. Nice lines.

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Enjoyed this Senryu that honors the standard 5-7-5 syllabic requirement of Traditional Haiku....which is how a Senryu should be constructed(IMO) ...Very Nicely Done ~FjR~

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