What Makes Bri Feel Bad....[personal] Poem by Bri Edwards

What Makes Bri Feel Bad....[personal]



I don't mean (by 'feel bad') unruly, criminal, or mean. I mean disgusted or disappointed, or somewhere in between.

It bothers me to see a person littering, but I still get through the day. If I think someone is wheeling a store's cart home, I really want to say:
'Did the manager give you permission? '.... It seems like stealing in a way.

I feel a little disappointed when the ice cream in carton is finished, and when old age causes a person's quality of life to be diminished. Of course I can buy more ice cream, though Aki may say 'no', and people really can limit how many years...they have left 'to go'.

I feel bad when I'm misquoted, when people try to 'put words in my mouth.' I actually manage to say enough 'bad things'...all by myself. I feel a little 'bad' if an [unnamed] woman complains.... when I raise my voice. I think it's a common trait of many men (Evolution?) : ...do we really have a choice? ?

So now I've told you some of the things that....can make me feel 'bad'. I tried to think of more things but couldn't, and that makes me feel very glad.

{Well, sure there are more things, ……but why dwell on what upsets?
Perhaps the more one dwells on positive things, ...the better one's life gets.}

(2-3-12)

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
i've only finished two or three cartons (1 1/2-or-2 quart-sized) of ice cream in one sitting...i mean one carton per sitting...in my lifetime (or was that four?) . i don't plan on that happening again unless there is an emergency.
also, if you wish, see my poem 'what makes bri feel good'. and check out my 'story' about the poem there.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Cynthia Buhain-baello 18 November 2012

This is a prose/poem and Ogden Nash wrote a lot of these - the style is free and spontaneous with some rhyme perhaps (but not always) but the content is its best ingredient. I enjoyed reading it, it's natural and candid, matter-of-fact approach makes the reading easy and delightful. 10++++

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Bri Edwards 13 November 2012

when i submitted this poem a few minutes ago it looked more like a poem to me. now, as i am previewing it, after successfully submitting it, i SEE it looks more like prose to me, BUT i like the look. isn't it funny what computers can decide to do on their own? ? bri edwards

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