What Piece Of An Advice Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

What Piece Of An Advice

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She was going abroad first time
I was hesitant but she was firm this time
She had pinned hope on skill test
The preparation was done by hr at best

Yes she had picked up thread
And wanted her life to lead
I had no hesitation in allowing
But she needed some following

What piece of an advice could I give?
She was upset in life and I believed
Whatever god does, it is for the good
From her firm resolution I clearly understood

She had never stepped out from small town
The place was new and totally unknown
She was to be picked there by my nice
She assured me with support and promise

She studied not only well
But worked hard too for story to tell
“Papa, the hard work has no parallel”
What else I need to hear from my small doll?

Almost six year have passed
But she has shined and outclassed
She is on her own feet
Very much confident for challenges to meet

Tuesday, April 15, 2014
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 15 April 2014

Beautiful Lacie Frazier-Dulaney12 minutes ago You must be proud. I would give my right arm to hear those words from my son. Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 15 April 2014

She was going abroad first time I was hesitant but she was firm this time

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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