What's The Point Poem by Rachel Hankins

What's The Point



What's the point of a heart
if you can't feel
whats the point of this world
if nothing seems real
whats the point of good-bye
if its not for good
whats the point of trying
if you never could
why does tommrow
come so slow
why does life
feel so low
why can't you feel
all of this pain anymore
why can't you see
our hopes splattered on the floor
when does this dark
finally turn light
when do your hopes
finally go right

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
J. Martinez 30 January 2009

i, personally am not a fan of a rhyme scheme...that said i honestly enjoyed this poem. good work

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