What's Wrong Poem by Haley Brown

What's Wrong



Everytime I hear your voice,
I feel like I have no choice.

Whenever I am with you, I can never frown.
You just keep my world going 'round.

Your always there, no matter what.
Rain or shine,
Day or night.

You've been there through it all.
You've helped stand me back up, after a fall.

Whenever we talk, I'm not sure where were going
As each day passes, it hurts not knowing.

But lately, It seems like your inside out.
I just want to understand what its about.

I'm still here,
Things just don't feel the same.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bethany Buhl 14 August 2008

I find it hard to be with someone who seems to be changing on you, but I guess you have to ask the question did you change to and would you want them to stick it out with you or would you want them to leave me. I guess there's no right answer to this.

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Joseph Poewhit 14 August 2008

Just have to stick it out - time.

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