What Was It? Poem by Yaci Pachenco

What Was It?

Rating: 5.0


What was it

That the first time i saw you,
You were the only thing my eyes wanted to see.

What was it

That every time you were around me,
I felt butterflies in my stomach.

What was it

That when you talked to me,
I could feel my face go red.

What was it

That at every touch,
I felt my-self melt.

What was it

That the more time i spent with you,

That, what i was feeling was getting bigger.

What was it...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Abdullah Musa 27 December 2009

You have a very nice poem here. Indeed those questions will keep on resounding in my head. Bravo! ! !

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Menime Soul..'d' Ugliloner 27 December 2009

Well..that was a rehearsal for love..which is coming next. :) jus kiddin..i love this one.

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Romeo Della Valle 27 December 2009

What was it? Obviously, it was love a first sight, my dear, pure love, only time will tell the rest, well penned, keep it up! you are in the right site...10+++HAPPY NEW YEAR!

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 27 December 2009

That the more time i spent with you, That, what i was feeling was getting bigger. What was it....ya it was eternal belonging and closeness wanted by your own feeling..true onedear go for it...so nice way of putting it....10 read mine.. miss i miss you...i miss...anywhere..butterflies around

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Chang Yi Huang 28 December 2009

Wowow! ! such a heartfelt love poem...i guess love can make you feel like that ~

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Robert Uy 02 January 2010

A love letter...honest and sincere...10/10!

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Ken E Hall 30 December 2009

It was youth my dear I remember trembling in the legs truthful poem thanks regards 'Ah youth is wasted on the young' Happy new year

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Lynn Glover 29 December 2009

A very good poem written with much tenderness and thought. Keep up the good work. Your friend in poetry Lynn

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Lady Grace 29 December 2009

that everytime you talk to me, am always nervous that am always excited to hear ur voice that i can see your lips speaking, saying words whispering ssshhhhh''what was it? ''....love this cutie cutieee poem...kittetttttttt...tmileeeeeeee

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Afzal Shauq 28 December 2009

That when you talked to me, I could feel my face go red. What was it a sweet poem which is repeated questions based..making the poem interesting and rich..its a good poem..liked it 10/10

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