What Was Once One Thing Poem by Brian Kilpatrick

What Was Once One Thing

Rating: 4.3


My soul picked up momentum
As I accumulated more and more debris
Everything I came in contact with
Was sucked into the black hole
That had become me

I searched for the words
The key to your heart
No amount of words worked
I fear I broke the lock

The more I tried the more I was broken
By all the words in my head left unspoken
I held the key you held your heart
What was once one thing never seemed so far apart

We were crushed by the wars
That no one could see
While I continued to battle
You had surrender long ago
On your knees for me

Wednesday, January 7, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: addiction
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Roseann Shawiak 02 July 2015

You definitely have a way with words, your style fits them nicely in verses filled with meaning. Another really great poem filled with raw emotion and stark reality of truth. Love your poetry! Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

0 0 Reply
Nishi Kumari 08 January 2015

beautifully written...keep up the great work...

0 0 Reply
READ THIS POEM IN OTHER LANGUAGES
Close
Error Success