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elena winters

Rookie (august 11 / joliet illinois)

whats the diffrence between lusting and loving someone


loving someone is caring for dat person

lusting for someone is diffrent
because when you lust you want to become intimate in a physical way

but for some reason a lot of people become confused between the two

when i first saw my precious admire
he was all that i desire

the way he walk carrying his swagg
thoughts of him run through my mind oh so fast

some people look like nerds when they where glasses
but when he wears them he looks so handsome

i want to devour him he wants to devour me
i love for him but he lust for me

he sees me but doesnt do much
but stares that look that gave me a rush

he turns i burn but cant resist thee

urges building up inside of me

is it lust or is it love

YOU BE THE JUDGE

Submitted: Sunday, October 12, 2008
Edited: Monday, November 10, 2008

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  • Rookie - 254 Points Ency Bearis (10/12/2008 11:42:00 PM)

    too much difference of love and lust...you narrated it well..well done..

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