Wheel Of Time Turns Poem by Seema Aarella

Wheel Of Time Turns

Rating: 2.5


And...
the wingless bird
pleads
the sky
For once
you descend
.......for me.

Monday, August 31, 2009
Topic(s) of this poem: poems
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 31 August 2009

lovely...you bring the picture to mind....pleading the sky to descend to feel it....sad...a wingless bird

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Catrina Heart 31 August 2009

awesome picturesque...........profoundness in symbolism! ! !

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Rakesh Bedi 31 August 2009

Passion, devotion, dedication and helplessness of wingless bird makes one Numb; thanks for sharing, seema!

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Anil Kumar Panda 03 September 2011

very nice.full of meaning.liked it.

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Vidyadhar Durgekar 19 November 2009

Short, sweet and deep in content..............

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Sarwar Chowdhury 10 September 2009

great metaphorical disclosure! 10+

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Vaibhav Pandey 06 September 2009

a poem filled with hope and despair simultaneously.....very expressive..10

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Indira Babbellapati 03 September 2009

and the sky did descend! the dreamscape of the wingless bird is the sky...

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