When Boys Begin To Think Poem by Elliot Moore Ahiator

When Boys Begin To Think

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When boys begin to think as men;

and maturity becomes more than a game.

When hard decisions leave a sour taste

yet take you must, however unpleasant.

When a mother's smothering

becomes no more than a necessary nuisance;

needed, yet a nuisance all the same.


When alone you must walk,

cold and in strange haven;

and among the unknown you must abide.

Tank! tank! tank!

Sounds from the forge.


Iron hammer against iron anvil,

in between, must metal succumb will to craftsman's mold

Therein, lies the lesson of life

and understand, a man need's must.

So when boys begin to think as men,

Then shall greatness shine unbid

Friday, August 23, 2013
Topic(s) of this poem: decisions,growing up,growth,life,lifestyle
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Allotey Abossey 06 June 2015

you write well of life realities, boys need to grow; when we are young we think as such but when we grow we've gotta put childishness aside and be able to take strong decisions. God bless you

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Exactly, Sometimes we forget when all boyishness must come to an end. Thank you

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Dave Walker 23 August 2013

A great poem, like it, a great write.

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thank you. Means alot that you like it.

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